The rose...

[Luna's Twin]

Yah, I write songs...Woot!

Here's one I wrote as a poem first...Anyway I was writing a play that the Drama club was doing and it just came to me.

I call it "the Rose," My friends call it "DEAR GOD JO! STOP SINGING!" and everyone else Calls it "Heaven."

I can't stay in heaven.
Believe me if I could-
I'd stay here forever
Right Next to You...

The Smell of sweet Rose Petals
Quickly fills the room.
And I kiss you good night.
You drive outta sight.

I can't stay in heaven.
Believe me if I could-
I'd stay here forever
Never Living without you...

The Rose starts to wilt
As the phone rings...
I pick it up
To find you may lose everything.

The rose wilting as I cry...
To face fact that you will surely die
I cannot come with you in heaven...
Only to see you again in heaven...

The rose has died...

[flamedfawkes]

That's really good! Really sad, but really really good! You definitely have a huge talent for writing. I like it!

[CoNFettY<3]

I LOVE IT! I like it Lill/Jo.It is so good!I wish I was poetic as you.

[Luna's Twin]

Call me Jo. Lily's just my RP'ing name.

Thanks! I wrote the play as a musical first then just edited out the music...It was supposed to be a modern day tragedy.

[CoNFettY<3]

That is good!I made one poem up but I'm still working on it.But now I give up on it.And I also like the title "DEAR GOD JO! STOP SINGING!"

Me: DEAR GOD JO! STOP SINGING!!!HAAA!!!*laugh so hard that I could cry* ;D